LOVE THAT. Amazing for a chorus, here's my idea for first verse:
Heidi was a little girl, she loved to paint she loved to twirl,
her moma said she'd be alright, but heidi knew she had to fight
from the stairwell, at the top, she threw her arms and began to drop,
at the bottom where she lay, suicidi, had her day
It's a winner if you ask me. What are you thinking for the instrumental?